Apr 4, 2009

Grammar mistakes

In this e-portfolio, I will identify 3 of my common grammar mistakes.

1. About the articles.
I usually misuse the articles, especially the definite article, 'the'.

e.g.
"Nowadays, we will no longer be surprised when we are reading a newspaper and find it saying the average temperature on the earth has increased by 0.4 to 0.8 degrees C since late 1800's."

In this sentence, I forget to put an article in front of the 'late 1800's'. Because 1800's is a very specific period of time.

The correct version is: "Nowadays, we will no longer be surprised when we are reading a newspaper and find it saying the average temperature on the earth has increased by 0.4 to 0.8 degrees C since the late 1800's."

2. The punctuations.
Sometimes I will misuse the semicolon when I actually need a comma there.

e.g.
"As the population on the earth is growing rapidly; there will be much more pressure on the environment than ever before."

In this sentence, we don't need to use a semicolon after the word 'rapidly'. Because these two parts are actually one sentence, not two.

The correct version is: "As the population on the earth is growing rapidly, there will be much more pressure on the envrionment than ever before."

3.About the pronouns.
I sometime misuse the pronouns, caused the sentence to be unnecessariely complex.

e.g.
"From Singapore's long-term development, it has the necessity promoting green chemistry."

In this sentence, 'it' represents 'Singapore's long-term development', but these two words are too near to each other, I don't need to use a preposition.

The correct version is: "Singapore's long-term development requires promoting green chemistry."

1 comment:

  1. It is good to see you quoting examples from your essays and identifying the common grammatical mistakes you face. You are also able to explain why the sentence is grammatically wrong and make the necessary corrections. I believe you will be able to make lesser mistakes in your essays from now on.

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